Sunday, 25 November 2018

Maria Julia Villareal

Adventure in Star Five Club

Once upon a time there was a beautiful girl called Alice, she was 22 months old but she looked like a three years old girl, Alice's also brunette, fit and she had big black eyes.
She had a normal family, Julia, her mother was 39 years old and her brother, Pablo was 11. They often went to the Star five Club on Thursday afternoon. Pablo used to play golf, Julia and Alice used to swim, so they looked happy and before coming back home, they had dinner together.
Alice was growing up very fast and she liked to climb stairs and mountains for kids.
One day they went to the club, located in the municipality of Puerto Triunfo in the department of Antioquia, Colombia.
This is a farm which have many attractions like aquatic attractions called “Acuasaurus, Cobras, Octopus, Savage River and Victory Waterfalls, wildlife Sanctuary; there are places to visit like blackbluck, chiguires's lake, crocodiles lake, elephant sanctuary, feline sanctuary, hippopotamus's lake, meerkats, monkey's island, vanesa, vera, zebras, monkeys, African Museum, Birds's world, butterfly vivarium, Jurassic adventure, memorial museum  and others.
They first went to visit Victory Waterfalls and after they were playing in Acuasaurus, in these place, Pablo met a boy called Andres who lived in Spain and went to visit Colombia, because his father was buying an apartment in the Island of San Andres.
Pablo y Andres spoke about their interests and hobbies and they both like to know about the wildlife, then Pablo asked his mother for going to visit the zoo with the family of Andres and enjoying the holiday together.
Julia was distressed because she didn’t know the other people, but Pablo was very enthusiastic with his new friend and to know about other culture, then Julia saw hello to Andres and his family and they talked with our about of the places to visit in Colombia.
After Pablo wanted to know the blackbluck, so they went to the zoo wildlife, suddenly there was a noise behind him, Julia looked around her and saw a tiger near to Alice, she started screaming and some workers of the zoo started running, but the tiger was closer to Alicia slowly and she didn’t afraid only walked and sang " brush, brush, it’s to brush your teeth, no, no no, I don’t want to brush mi teeth, please, please, brushing is good for you".
Many people went to look to help her, so Andres caught a wooden stick and hit the tiger in its mouth, but the tiger roared furiously and Alice shots her hamburger and climbs the ladder next to her. Everyone started running and the workers of the zoo caught the tiger and they gave him its daily food.
Everyone took to Alice for help to help her and she was excited and happy, sometimes she understand to animals and she is mysterious.
Alice is a world of beautiful surprises, after the family of Andres invites us to this house in Pamplona of the country Spain ask thanks for saving to Andres.
END…..

Comments by Maritza Atenea Rosas Rodriguez

Hello partners and tutor.
I share you some suggestions I made in the first part of "Alice" the MARIA JULIA VILLAREAL story. 

Adventure in “Hacienda Napoles“ Maria's Version
Adventure in “Hacienda Napoles“ Maritza's Version
Once upon a time a beautiful girl called Alice, she is 22 months old but she looks three years old, also Alice's brunette, fit and she has big black eyes.
She has a normal family, Julia her mother, she's 39 years old and her brother Pablo and he’s 11 years old. They often go the Club Star five on Thursday afternoon. Pablo plays golf, Julia and Alice practice swimming, so they looks happy and before come back at home, they've dinner together.
Alice grows very fast and she likes to climb stairs and mountains for kids.
One day they went to Hacienda Napoles, located in the municipality Puerto Triunfo of the department Antioquia in Colombia.
This place have many attractions like aquatic attractions called “Acuasaurus, Cobras, Octopus, Savage River and Victory Waterfalls, wildlife Sanctuary there are place to visit like blackbluck, chiguires's lake, crocodiles, elephant sanctuary, feline sanctuary, hippopotamus's lake, meerkats,monkey's island, vanesa, vera, zebras, monkeys, African Museum, Birds's world, butterfly vivarium, Jurassic adventure, memorial museum  and others.
We first went to visit Victory Waterfalls and after they were playing in Acuasaurus, here Pablo knows a boy called Andres that lived in Spain and went to visit Colombia, because his father was buying an apartment in San Andres.
Pablo y Andres spoke about their interests and hobbies and they both like to know about the wildlife, then Pablo asked his mother for go to visit the zoo with the family of Andres and enjoy the holiday together.
Once upon a time there was a beautiful girl called Alice, she was 22 months old but she looked like a three years old girl, Alice's also brunette, fit and she had big black eyes.
She had a normal family, Julia, her mother was 39 years old and her brother, Pablo was 11. They often went to the  Star five Club on Thursday afternoon. Pablo used to play golf, Julia and Alice used to swim, so they looked happy and before coming back home, they had dinner together.
Alice was growing up very fast and she liked to climb stairs and mountains for kids.
One day they went to Hacienda Napoles, located in the municipality  of Puerto Triunfo in the department of Antioquia, Colombia.
This is a farm which have many attractions like aquatic attractions called “Acuasaurus, Cobras, Octopus, Savage River and Victory Waterfalls, wildlife Sanctuary; there are places to visit like blackbluck, chiguires's lake, crocodiles lake, elephant sanctuary, feline sanctuary, hippopotamus's lake, meerkats, monkey's island, vanesa, vera, zebras, monkeys, African Museum, Birds's world, butterfly vivarium, Jurassic adventure, memorial museum  and others.
They first went to visit Victory Waterfalls and after they were playing in Acuasaurus, in these place, Pablo met a boy called Andres who lived in Spain and went to visit Colombia, because his father was buying an apartment in the Island of San Andres.
Pablo y Andres spoke about their interests and hobbies and they both like to know about the wildlife, then Pablo asked his mother for going to visit the zoo with the family of Andres and enjoying the holiday together.


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Have a great night. 
Sincerely,
MaritzAtenea RR



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